RAPUNZEL´S STORY

·        THE HUSBAND´S WIFE WAS SICK

·        HUSBAND WAS TO FIND AN HERB TO HIS WIFE AND HE FOUND A WITCH WHO PROMISED THAT WILL CURE HIS WIFE IF HE GAVE HIS FIRST CHILD, THE DESPERATE HUSBAND SAID ¡¡OHH YES IS MORE IMPORTANT THE HEALTH TO MY WIFE!!

·        WHEN BORN THE MOTHER’S DAUGHTER WAS BEAUTIFUL AND HER MOTHER DIDN´T DELIVER HER DAUGHTER

·        RETURN WITCH AND STOLE THE GIRL AND WENT TO A GREATER CASTLE,  SO LEFT THE GIRL ENCLOSED HERE

·        RAPUNZEL WHOSE LONG HAIR WAS PLAITED

·        EVERY DAY WITCH WENT AND SHARE LITTLE MINUTES WITH A GIRL, THE WITCH WOULD SLIDE NIMBLY DOWN TO THE GROUND.

·         THE KING'S SON WAS RIDING THROUGH THE FOREST WHEN HE HEARD RAPUNZEL SINGING

·        THE CASTLE HADN´T DOOR

·        THE WITCH CAME ALONG AND THE PRINCE WATCHED HER CAREFULLY

·        ALWAYS THE WITCH SCREAMED PLEASE RAPUNZEL GIVE ME YOUR HAIR TO I CAN UP

·        ONE DAY PRINCE GO UP OF THE CASTLE AND SAW A BEAUTIFUL GIRL AND HE WAS IN LOVE

·        THE PRINCE SAVED TO RAPUNZEL AND WENT VERY HAPPY

 

RAPUNZEL
CATEGORY	4	3	2	1	POINTS
ORGANIZATION	The story show a sequence and all the ideas are in order.
ELEMENTS OF FOLK TALES	At least two or three elements of folk tales are included I this story.
SPELLING AND PUNCTUATION			There are three or more spelling errors also punctuation.
NEATNESS		Somethings are clear.
	Total					13
Teacher comments	Rapunzel is a beauty and dreamy women.