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CINDERELLA WAS A
POOR GIRL
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WORKED SO HARD
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SHE LIVED IN A
HOUSE WITH HER TWO STEPSISTER AND HER STEPMOTHER
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SHE CLEANED STEPMOTHER´HOUSE EVERY DAY AND HER
LIFE WAS VERY BORING AND COMPLICATED
§ HER MOTHER WAS
DEAD AND HER FATHER HAD MARRIED A WIDOW WITH TWO DAUGHTERS
§ HER STEPMOTHER
DIDN´T LIKE HER ONE LITTLE BIT
§ CINDERELLA USED
TO SPEND LONG HOURS TALKING WITH A CAT
§ A FAIRY GOD
MOTHER APPEAR AND SHE ASKED TO A WISH
§ CINDERELLA LOST
HER SHOE
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CINDERELLA
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CATEGORY
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4
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3
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2
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1
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POINTS
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ORGANIZATION
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The story show a sequence and
all the ideas are in order
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ELEMENTS OF
FOLK TALES
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There are many elements of
stories that have worked
in class.
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SPELLING AND
PUNCTUATION
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There are no
spelling or
punctuation
errors in the
final
draft.
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NEATNESS
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The final draft of the story was clear and easy to understand.
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Total
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16
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Teacher
comments
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The story was fantastic and attractive for the Reading.
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